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Feedback from Jess :-

I think that the colours are quite boring and very dull. It doesn't really catch my eye. If i was looking for a magazine i would look for something that would be eye catching and bright with bold images and text. I don't think this contents page does this. If the front cover was bold, bright and eye-catching i would go for the magazine, but then when it come to the contents page i would be disappointed when i saw this.

Feedback from John:-

I think the layout of the contents page is good but i think the red writing in the bottom left of the page looks a little out of place. I think the use of the arrow however is a good idea and overall i think its a good looking piece and a professional looking contents page.

Feedback from Max:-

I think the colour scheme is not too eye catching and because the model is a female, i would use more feminine colours. The subheadings in my opinion, is a good idea and it makes the page look more sophisticated. If i saw this in a shop i wouldnt think it was out of place as it does follow conventions and looks like a real contents page.